Hi -
Two thoughts ...
1. To get the best effect (like we have been discussing), you need (a) a clean, noise-free sky; (b) clear distinctions between well saturated primary colors (ie, cyan-blue sky, green trees, and orange-red bricks; and, (c) smooth gradations between the various tonal (ie, brightness) levels. In fact, I already commented on this in post #9: "...As an example, I'm going to use one of my images that has strong colors: a red fire truck, a nice blue crisp September sky, a yellow line on the street, green street sign & trees, etc. ...". The results of the procedure we discussed are very sensitive to these factors.
I'm not sure how you processed your scan after the version you posted, so perhaps you have already done these things, but the version that you posted has lots of noise in the sky. It is a very high contrast image with really murky shadow areas; and, there are some funky non-blue colors in the sky, as well as a slight blue cast to the trees.
If it was me, I would try to adjust that image to look something like the version attached below before I tried to apply the procedure we had discussed. In fact, whenever I intend to apply almost any effect to a photo, I almost always first try to bring it a standard, conventional, good-looking state that any photographer would be proud to show, ie, good tonality, good color correction, lighting problems corrected, etc..
2. To enhance the visual suggestion of moonlight / night, I would (a) put a blue cast over the result; and, (b) show some contrasting yellow or orange lights coming from inside a few of the rooms/windows.
Just my $0.02,
Cheers,
Tom M