Running Out of Time

[DannyMorrisPD]

I lied, this was shot at 45mm. For some reason I though I was zoomed all the way out. The lens used was a Canon 24-105. But I made some adjustments as requested. Here's the new version.

 

[egosbar]

the dark patch near her face is destracting , like the image though

 

[DannyMorrisPD]

good call egosbar. I'll take care of that.

 

[Dalkarls]

I think you have made some very nice improvements to the picture Danny! Her left (camera right) foot is maybe a little bit to bright if the cealing lamp is supposed to be the only light source. Or her face and and upper body would be brighter if so. The water that is falling out of the painting is a little bit to white in my personal opinion, but I think thats just a matter of taste. I would have prefered it a little bit darker in the highlights and maybe a slight hint of that yellow light. But you have a very nice picture here Danny and it's been fun seeing you work it thru!