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Critic becomes Criticized!


lol I've been working at this for days and NOW you show me this???? hahahha cruel genius is what that is.
 
No mate, help is what it is. And we all have our parts to play here - in what ever format or size.
Theres nothing wrong with your image, just needed clarification is all, your way is your way - nothing wrong with that.
 
I think it looks great Pepperbel. Taking Paul's comment into mind, another option might be to define the pipe as standing out from the background, giving it light and tone that is different and emphasizing the volume. That would preclude the need to change your composition and mess with the shadows. For the most part I think it already has that; it could just use more emphasis.
 
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OK thanks guys, really helpful advice all around, so I'm gonna go back and edit, and then hopefully bring back a finished image :D
 
Yeah ok mate, when ever your ready, either way it will be fine.
 
drumroll please.....

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With Paul's mad skills, Which I think was a great improvement, and ibclare's awesome advice. What do ya think?
and be honest, don't worry about giving me a hard time, I'm really enjoying this, it's improved a lot since I started, and I want perfection, so if you see other issues, name 'em :)

thanks again for all your help, I appreciate it.
 
I've learned that to criticize anyone's else work is pointless. To critique it is something altogether different. <---College rearing its head in that statement. Ok, in the room with the remote control to open the doors seems like its in a place that would be a biohazard. It's rusty and run-down, but the lush jungle beyond the doors seem like it would be a sort of paradise. Jungle's are anything but paradise with all the hidden dangers that a jungle contains. Honestly, the only thing I could point out is that the room is not quite straight. It looks like its slanted upward. May want to play around with the perspective so that it seems like the room is situated on flat ground. Other than that I think it's awesome.
 
Nicely stated Chris. Yes, it's an ironice juxtaposition. The floor looks perfectly fine to me; it is slanted upward; artistic choice and IMHO, it works. :mrgreen:
 
Yeah that's cool, also gives the impression that one is stepping out of the safety of a controlled artificial environment and into an untamed environment. Where the h**l did I get that from?
 
Woa ok lot going on since I Last looked. ChrisHPZ....very observant of you, and very accurate. For me, the idea behind it wasn't that the outside world was a jungle, I kind of wanted it to look like a paradise, untouched, but with history, so that whoever was in this artificial environment would want to go out there & away from human testing. If that makes sense, I see your point and I agree with you but I'm happy with it being paradisicle (<--word?)

Slanted room....didn't even see that, will try to work on it, to create an alternate & see how it looks. Thank you for pointing these things out.

Will be back with a edit soon i hope.
 
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