Typography September 2013 feedback please :)

[CL3]

Last few pieces of typography I have done over the last month thought i would share any constructive feedback welcome thanks

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[IamSam]

Christian, number two and four are great. In four, the "graphic design" text colors are not quite right though. Maybe it's the white.

One and three, not so much. The first.............I won't even go there, LOL!! On three, if you raised the opacity of the text I think it would look much better.

 

[CL3]

Thanks for the feedback sam ! Oh come on man bit harsh on the first haha I rushed my self to finish that and made some changes at the end maybe they back fired ! Still learned a few tricks on that one (and on them all). Thanks alot

 

[ibclare]

Hmmm, I think the first is OK, if maybe a little too familiar, as in done before. But good practice I think.

Number two makes me dizzy and a little nauseated.

I very much like number 4. Creative, great textures, interesting colors. Perhaps the word Design doesn't come off as well-balanced. It looks contrived. It doesn't blend in with the overall style. Looks like you're trying too hard for cool and end up making it too complicated. But o/w, I like it a lot!