Two Horses

[Vafann]

I tried to do something less messy today, and was focusing on composition, I´m not quite sure how well I did, it might be imbalanced somehow, but right now I can´t see it. any help is welcome as usual.

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[colleague]

I think it's perfect in balance and I like the background

 

[Vafann]

I think it's perfect in balance and I like the background

Really? Thank you so much colleague!

 

[$1r_M4x1mu$]

Nice Job Vafann

You could add a dark red overlay on those horses so it blends better on the comp.

 

[fenix]

I think it looks great! Bus as maximus said, maybe it needs blending in to the background just a little bit. Maybe try and lower opacity a little and see what happens.

 

[ibclare]

Hi Sir M, long time no see!

Vafann, I agree. Nothing wrong with the balance; very symmetrical. I also agree with Sir M maybe for a different reaason. I think there is a bit too little contrast and the horses would be a good vehicle for increasing that; or maybe the designs . . . The thing that I see is that the horse's hooves touch the emblem below. Since you're looking for balance all around, I would suggest making the space around the horses the same distance from the top emblem as the bottom. O/W nice, different.

Just noticed: reason for editing: strange?

 

[Toney Park]

It looks nice. Is it some kind of beer trademark design? Not familiar with this kind of thing, but if there's one problem (if it can be called a problem), it's a little strange when all other elements are red while the horses are black-white. Other than that it's well balanced and looks tasty.

 

[Vafann]

Nice Job Vafann

You could add a dark red overlay on those horses so it blends better on the comp.

I will most certainly give that a try maximus! Thank you!

 

[Vafann]

I think it looks great! Bus as maximus said, maybe it needs blending in to the background just a little bit. Maybe try and lower opacity a little and see what happens.

I will do that too Fenix! Thank you very much!

 

[Vafann]

Hi Sir M, long time no see!

Vafann, I agree. Nothing wrong with the balance; very symmetrical. I also agree with Sir M maybe for a different reaason. I think there is a bit too little contrast and the horses would be a good vehicle for increasing that; or maybe the designs . . . The thing that I see is that the horse's hooves touch the emblem below. Since you're looking for balance all around, I would suggest making the space around the horses the same distance from the top emblem as the bottom. O/W nice, different.

Just noticed: reason for editing: strange?

Heeeelooo Clare! Thank you! Yes, I know exactly what you mean by where the hooves are compared to one over them, I kept trying to move them so that there was the exact same amount of space but I though it looked weird, I tried all kinds of variations of moving everything up and down. I finally settled for this, but I still wasen´t sure if it looked strange or not. I´m really glad you noticed that because I really couldn´t decide if it looked weird or not.

The edit was because for some reason the picture ended up to the far right of the screen and the text was all over the place, I couldn´t possibly write all that as a reason for editing, so "Strange" was all I could come up with that was short. LOL!

 

[Vafann]

It looks nice. Is it some kind of beer trademark design? Not familiar with this kind of thing, but if there's one problem (if it can be called a problem), it's a little strange when all other elements are red while the horses are black-white. Other than that it's well balanced and looks tasty.

Thank you Toney! No it´s not a beer trademark, it´s just a thing I made for practicing, I want to try to learn how to combine text and graphics, so since I used two horses for the pic, I just wrote that lol, it means nothing at all, and the whole thing is just practice and experimenting, while I´m learning, I´m a newbie. I post a lot here to get feedback so that I can improve, I have learned tons of stuff since I became a member here, there are so many helpful people all over the place.