That Electric Feel Cover

[Zeealex]

I designed a Book cover for a narrative (yes another ) i am writing about a young photographer who gains the ability to control anything electrical from being struck by lightning while taking a photo of a run down church.

It's called "That Electric Feel"
And The Main Character, Catherine, does Use a Pentax K-R in the story hence why it's on the cover.

Credits Given to mum, she helped me out with trying to create depth.
Feel Free to comment and give ideas

 

[Paul]

The central lightning bolt is going the wrong way mate, makes it feel awkward.

 

[SeniorS]

For my eye, camera itself are too dark (no details). If you'll print it that will look like just black area. Maybe that's what you wanted.

 

[Zeealex]

well it was meant to look like a bad weather day soo i made it a little darker, i could always remove a grey layer if need be.

@paul, i was trying to make it look like it had been electrified, but i'll change that lightning bolt.

 

[Zeealex]

here's the updated version