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Some of my designs


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Hytham

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Hello guys!
I wanna show you some of my simple designs to know your feedback about them and get advices from you.

1.It was a compitition to create something inspired from the bowling ball :

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2.Ramadan is an Arabian month which Muslims fast in it and do more good things "Ramadan Kareem" like a felicitation for Ramadan :
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3.This words are a part of Arabic song and it's means "Everybody do what relieve him" LOL :D

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4.Sacrifice with animals like sheeps and give meat and food to poor is a habit in Al Adha feast...and balloons for kids :)

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Sorry for a lot of speech...waiting 4 ur comments ;)
 
Thanks a lot ibclare for your comment,glad u like the bowling ball :)
But i think there are another 3 designs here :D
I wanna any comment like "bad work" "you are loser" to support me plz :D
 
yeah, huh. Nothing like un-constructive criticism. Ignore it.

Yes, there are three other designs. So, since you want, I'll make some comments:

The last one is very child-like. Did you draw the lamb cause it's very cute and nicely made. The rest of the picture is just too cute for me, but could be great for a children's book.

The Ramadan is a nice one. The glow to the right of the text is throwing it off for me. It may partly be my screen - I've tried tilting it - but I think the problem is that you are using a white inner glow or layer painting ?? and that ends up looking mushy and not the kind of metallic glow I think you want.

The other is lacking in color contrast and composition. I guess it depends what it is made for but I find it boring and the shadow doesn't work for me.

I think your work has promise. Look to the first to see the kind of techniques that make for polished work. Have fun.
 
Other than the first image (the bowling ball type object), your designs lack continuity and flow.
When creating art you have to inspire words through a picture, which can be difficult- Yet you did well on with the ramadan image, it shows a sense of celebration and that is a good thing, but that picture gets a bit thrown off when the border of the photo is rounded off with a grey (were you trying to use it as a banner for a website??)
The last image... Well, that is just self-explanatory.

You have potential, but lack the ability to express it digitally.
 
Thank you ibclare and DoTTGaMMa for your important comments ^_^
Thank you DigitalBlogTuts glad u like them :)
 
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