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some logos >>> need criticism


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Hey that's my first post in this great community
so i'll add some logos & i need criticism go say all u have cuz i want really to improve my level

Magazine logo : it's a magazine that share creativity topics & youth matters it's called 2wint

final Shokry.jpg

the quill is fully designed by pen tool


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second logo >>>> it's about some cultural conversation

salon red&b.jpg
22222.jpg
i'm waiting for ur comments >>>>>
 

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I like the second one the most, as it has simple, sleek lines, and looks elegant. The rest however are not so good. The fist one has a gradient that looks like it doesn't fit the logo properly, and the rest look like a miss match of different elements, thrown together.

I also believe you was meant to ask for critique, though we will criticize if that is what you really want!:thumbsup:
 
sprucemagoo1 said:
I like the second one the most, as it has simple, sleek lines, and looks elegant. The rest however are not so good. The fist one has a gradient that looks like it doesn't fit the logo properly, and the rest look like a miss match of different elements, thrown together.

I also believe you was meant to ask for critique, though we will criticize if that is what you really want!:thumbsup:
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oh i'm really happy that u criticize me that clearly that's all i asked .. i was just smiling reading ur comment .... u are totally true the only design that i worked on so much is the second ..... i'll make another logo for the cultural conversation & come to see if it gets better ............ thank u so much
 
the second one is difinitely the best.
Other then what was mentioned before, the text is also very hard to read, especially the "n" and "t".
 
Very nice. Be careful of your symmetry as in the third image: the centers of the image and that of the text are different. In other words, they are not lined up with each other. In the 4th one, the bars that over and underline the text are set too close to the top. Set up guidelines anytime you have to work with this kind of graphic design.
 
Really cool logos
I like the second one. Because I feel that you have real effort into it. The first one, to so much, and I don't like the layer style that you put on design#1.
Keep it up :) (BTW, I speak Arabic ^_^)
 
I've been thinking about the second logo, which I also like. I would like to see it without the background. Would you do that?

It seems to me that the style of the logo -- clean, classic, simple -- versus the style of the background -- grunge -- just don't mix well. Even the color of the bg seems to overcome the elegance of the piece.
 
Barhom Basri said:
Really cool logos
I like the second one. Because I feel that you have real effort into it. The first one, to so much, and I don't like the layer style that you put on design#1.
Keep it up :) (BTW, I speak Arabic ^_^)
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Thx bro .. & i'm happy that u speak Arabic too ..:D
ibclare said:
I've been thinking about the second logo, which I also like. I would like to see it without the background. Would you do that?

It seems to me that the style of the logo -- clean, classic, simple -- versus the style of the background -- grunge -- just don't mix well. Even the color of the bg seems to overcome the elegance of the piece.
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Thx i'm happy u like this design ... it was a shock for me the psd file of the design was lost it was on my old disk on C & i forget to pick it up ....... but thank god i upload two images & one of them was without BG & different layer style here it is

simple 2.jpg
 
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