Review

[gautamz07]

Please review this , i am a newbie , so don't expect too much Just before i send this to my boss i taught i'd review this on the forum , so friends just sit back and tell me how it look and what i could have done better . I personally think i could have better emphasised the text in black with a shape or something behind it . But never mind .

regards .

Gautam

 

[DannyOlivier]

I think this is in the wrong section so dont be surprised if someone moves it to the show-board section of the forum.

Just first off is there some sort of grey block behind the "SES" bit in Session?

Also I would probably write "Admission for out next academic session are open and Filling Fast" not "fast Filling".

 

[gautamz07]

Eyes of an Owl , haha . yeah there was a gey section , painted it off , thank you , sorry did't know there was a different section , so won't do it again . What do you think about the image is it dull , any additional effects you would suggest or any ideas or just think jst good enough .

Thank you .

 

[gautamz07]

Will change the text last , thank you for the inputs though !

 

[dv8_fx]

Personally I prefer....
"Admission for our next academic session is open with limited seats available".

Tho I don't know how you term it in your area.... shouldn't it be ACADEMIC SEMESTER rather than SESSION?


Rather than just a plain crest emblazoned with Admission Open, can't you use the institution's logo or crest with that line underneath?.


Use larger and bolder text for the main message.

Try to phrase it like this ... with emphasis on ADMISSION and IS OPEN.....

ADMISSION
FOR OUR NEXT
ACADEMIC SESSION
IS OPEN
with limited seats available

 

[gautamz07]

Thank you Div8 , That was helpful , just my bad grammer . and yes the logo does come in , i'll fix that too . TY