QuickComposition

[Unscripted]

Here is a composition i made, i would be pleased to hear some feedback to let me know how i can improve



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[Argos]

Nice work! maybe the middle cloud a little too blury and the big building near the guy have too much orange i dont thing the light of the explosion woul be on that side. Maybe destroy some building near the explosion.

As personal opinion i would remove the buble.

Cheers!

 

[chrisdesign]

It's a very good work.
But it doesn't show the disastrous destruction such a bomb actually can have or had.
I personally would enlarge the bomb to double size and make it much much brighter. And the edges of the bubble should be brighter then the sky.

 

[inkpad.t]

Agreeing with the above comments, after those corrections, there would be smoke or dust clouds racing around the destroyed buildings as the destruction burst in outward motion from ground zero.