Pet Shark

[albertdsouza]

I was wondering if there is any way I can improve this work of mine ?

 

[prd]

not bad

 

[Dalkarls]

This is great, love the idea and contrast/light is hitting good. Surface of the water feel a little bit flat (Maybe some tiny waves), the far end could maybe be less in focus and if you are going with the classic gold fish bowl then it looks a little bit blurry in the top? Is it supposed to be a water edge instead of glass? I like that alot, but then the near side maybe should have a little bit more of that feeling aswell, it gets to blurry if you ask me. I think this will get very good with a little bit more work!
(My english is not the best, but maybe you can make some sense out of it)

 

[albertdsouza]

Thanks I'll definitely work on that.

 

[Tom Mann]

For Pete's sake, feed the poor guy. Fitting in that little bowl, he looks like he's never had a decent meal in his life.


PS - I'll get serious after I've had some lunch. ;-)

T

 

[inkpad.t]

That fish looks like some one stole it from our ward aquarium , we don't feed them either, they just feed us to them when they want to get rid of us..

About the image.... Looks Really Good... Probably just me though but it looks like the bowls floating and not sat on a base. if it is you could try and distinguish ( that's a word for me to spell by a lang challk ) .... between the bg and the base the bowl is sat on a bit more. ( especially for those of use tied, gagged and blind..that should be blindfolded)...

 

[Fatboy73]

You could work on the shadow. It would actually look like this http://www.ehow.com/list_5905475_ideas-centerpieces-fish-bowls.html

just click on the picture of the fish bowl for the larger picture.

 

[Paul]

Very nice effort.

 

[Mana]

I like the idea. Try lowering the opacity on the shark with a few percent. So it looks a little like he is more in the water.