New Design

[Brandon Creative]

Hey guys, I'm personally about to make my switch over to freelance. I have several design ideas for branding myself as a designer, visual effects artist, and a motion graphics tutor online and in the classroom.

I honestly want to show off my new logo design and maybe a little critique from my Photoshop friends.



and I would also like to incorporate this some how.



Any ideas? should I add more detail or take detail away from the second picture?

Thanks.

 

[Paul]

Nice stuff mate, the first as a few line errors, slightly 'off' around the curves on the 'b', the central orange thing is 'off' also. As for second image why not put the first in the one lens of the sunglasses?

 

[sprucemagoo1]

There is a lot I like about the two designs. Far more good than bad anyway, but unfortunately there is no such thing as a creative complement. Here are the things that are just niggling me as I look at them.

• There is a highlight on the shades on characters left eye to him, which should not be there, as the nose would stop the light from happening. Maybe should be at the top of the lens rim from the left side as it rises to the middle of the lens.

• I would argue that even if the other eyebrow was relaxed, you would still see it, or at least the top of it past the shades.

• Would it look better if the outline for the nose and the chin crease were the same colour as the shadow under the chin, instead of the grey.

• The bottom left corner of the B troubles me. It looks like it should either be rounded or cornered but not both, and the orange bit would in my opinion look a lot better if it was aligned with the right edge of what I can only describe as the stem.

I hope this is taken in the manner in which it is meant, and not just as a bashing of your work.

 

[LakoDesigns]

the stuff is really impressive! the first logo is really clean, very simple, but it's good anyway!