My Photo Manipulation works

[asanka04024]

I am new to Photoshop guru forum , So this is my first thread and i will post my works here
Advises and comments are welcome thanks very much.

 

[ibclare]

Hi asanka, welcome to PSG. Overall, pretty good work.

I like how you made a throne of the graveyard pieces. Very creative. The blood spatters, and whatnot on the shirt, and the eye work well ... eww, lol. The flames, the wraith, the skull, very cool. Excellent selection of the model (except around the shirt).

Some things that need work. First of all, I think the lions are too neon for the composition. They are also roughly colored and their eyes are too much like plastic beads pasted on, so those should be blended better, maybe even blurred slightly. If you look at the colorization around the fingers and a couple other places, you can see where it is not finished out, so that should be fixed. The shirt has some rough edges and loses all the soft drape that fabric has. It happens on the sides and for some reason at the hemline, the coloring is not like the original and is also rough edged. Compare it to the original. Some shadows, mainly around the selection need to be replaced. The feet especially look like they're floating on the ground. So look at that.

I looked pretty carefully at your manipulation because it was serious work on your part, I like it, and it is well worth it for you to fix what doesn't quite work and make it excellent.

 

[asanka04024]

hello ibclare

Thanks very much for the advises .Really Appreciate
now i feel that this manipulation need some improvements as you advice ed . around shirt really needs to be improved .

thanks very much

 

[ibclare]

ywc asanka. I really would like to see what you come up with. Post your next effort here. I suggest you don't change tooo much. The composition itself is good as it is, IMO.