Good to see the new site, and good to see my new site too!
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www.create-studio.com
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www.create-studio.com
comments plz
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Along with the issue of spelling, (still lacking!),can I throw grammer into the mix? It's all over the place.JoeD said:It's now 11 days later. Did you fix the spelling mistakes? I stills see lots of themM-I-5 said:
I do like the Plain Jane design. It's not offensive.
Hey all,
Like the site
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Have to agree with JoeD and Rich about the spelling! You need to get that changed! I know it's a pain, but it would really set-you-up for more clients!
I have to agree with Rich when he said,
It kinda' turned me off too! It makes you sound almost condescending! You definitely don't what that portrayed to potential clients!! You have to remember, that just because they come to you to design their respective web-site(s)/page(s), doesn't mean they don't know how to build them on their own. They probably don't have the time (and in some cases -- they don't know how to build them) to do it themselves.
Otherwise, yes I do like the look and feel of the overall site!! Nice job on it!
Like the site
!Have to agree with JoeD and Rich about the spelling! You need to get that changed! I know it's a pain, but it would really set-you-up for more clients!
I have to agree with Rich when he said,
It kinda' turned me off too! It makes you sound almost condescending! You definitely don't what that portrayed to potential clients!! You have to remember, that just because they come to you to design their respective web-site(s)/page(s), doesn't mean they don't know how to build them on their own. They probably don't have the time (and in some cases -- they don't know how to build them) to do it themselves.
Otherwise, yes I do like the look and feel of the overall site!! Nice job on it!
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Nice clean site that gets down to business quickly. Looks like its targeted to appeal to the business owners. -- Good focus on sales.
BTW You asked for thoughts and suggestions --my only thought is maybe changing the picture in the masthead with each page unless that distrupts your layout.,
BTW You asked for thoughts and suggestions --my only thought is maybe changing the picture in the masthead with each page unless that distrupts your layout.,
Hopefully the original poster is still lurking the boards-
It's well over 3 months later and spelling and grammer mistakes still abound (by the way, in the sentence that bugs everyone-and me too-it's "your" not "you're" [you are])
Very discouraging-for someone who wanted our feedback I'm wondering why it wasn't acted on-especially such black and white issues as spelling errors (which are easy to fix).
Oh well-we tried...
It's well over 3 months later and spelling and grammer mistakes still abound (by the way, in the sentence that bugs everyone-and me too-it's "your" not "you're" [you are])
Very discouraging-for someone who wanted our feedback I'm wondering why it wasn't acted on-especially such black and white issues as spelling errors (which are easy to fix).
Oh well-we tried...
Joy Foraker
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I had another look because your site was bumped. It seems improved and I realize some words are spelled differently in English --as opposed to the American way.
I like the Lucy site you demo - good work.
A thought: On your masthead you say "Design that works" my suggestion would be "Designs that work" it seems more on point to me.
Another thought, the overall feeling seems cold with wintery blues, maybe working in some warmth using yellow toned colors would liven it up. Or even blues that are warm.
Technically, when I first opened your site, the JS and CSS seemed to conflict about how to light up your menu (when I moused over). Just using CSS would simplify.
I wish you continued success with your site
I like the Lucy site you demo - good work.
A thought: On your masthead you say "Design that works" my suggestion would be "Designs that work" it seems more on point to me.
Another thought, the overall feeling seems cold with wintery blues, maybe working in some warmth using yellow toned colors would liven it up. Or even blues that are warm.
Technically, when I first opened your site, the JS and CSS seemed to conflict about how to light up your menu (when I moused over). Just using CSS would simplify.
I wish you continued success with your site
Very clean-looking site.
Customers need to be sure you can do the job you offer, so layout, style, colour, spelling and grammar are important - you're presenting yourself and need to do it as efficiently and as well as possible - and don't give the competition anything to pick on!
So...
"companies" not "companys" needs fixed,
otherwise my only other adverse comment is that I don't like:
"You the customer
Because we regard you and you're needs as highly as we do ourselves"
in any case "you're" should be "your".
You could perhaps just put "because you the customer are important to us." which gets the message across.
Customers need to be sure you can do the job you offer, so layout, style, colour, spelling and grammar are important - you're presenting yourself and need to do it as efficiently and as well as possible - and don't give the competition anything to pick on!
So...
"companies" not "companys" needs fixed,
otherwise my only other adverse comment is that I don't like:
"You the customer
Because we regard you and you're needs as highly as we do ourselves"
in any case "you're" should be "your".
You could perhaps just put "because you the customer are important to us." which gets the message across.