My New B/Card & Logo Design.

[Inkz]

Here are two concepts for my new logo and Business card design.

I've dabbled in logos before and I wanted something clean and simple.

Maybe some critique on these or which design do you think looks better?

v1



v2

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[TheSketcher]

these are nice! i think if you curved the orange shape to make it like a simple flame it would look pretty cool, but out of these two i prefer the first one, it looks better with the smaller orange shape, they are both very elegant though!

 

[Inkz]

these are nice! i think if you curved the orange shape to make it like a simple flame it would look pretty cool, but out of these two i prefer the first one, it looks better with the smaller orange shape, they are both very elegant though!

Thank you very much for looking in and taking the time to comment.

The orange shape represents an ink drip hence Inkz lol. I should have mentioned that in the topic.

 

[TheSketcher]

Thank you very much for looking in and taking the time to comment.

The orange shape represents an ink drip hence Inkz lol. I should have mentioned that in the topic.

thanks you, and that makes sense lol, and the pointed side should be at the top then, also with the pointed side down it looks like a location icon/symbol.

which font did you use? just out of curiosity?

 

[sprucemagoo1]

I like the first one better in terms of the white corners, though that may be because of my ocd I like things to have symmetry. The problem I have with the first one is the alignment in reference to the top most part of dot on the I. It would almost definitely look better if the gap there, was the same as the gap between the word designer and the other corner.

In regards to the dot over the I, with your name being Inkz, it will always make more sense to have it looking like a drop of ink.

So To illustrate this, I hope you don't mind:-

 

[Inkz]

Good point spruce....

And yeah it does look alot better just as you illustrated.

Thanks for the input.

 

[Rob_IMX]

Definitely prefer the second one.. the logo is larger and the orange shape above the I is more prominent which is a good branding feature.

 

[Inkz]

Thanks Rob...

I actually prefer the 2nd as well, I gunna make a few minor tweeks to it.

@Sketcher

The font is Bitstream Vera Serif

 

[Rob_IMX]

Thanks ...look forward to seeing the update result!

 

[ibclare]

I agree with Chad. That was what I was going to point out. I can see why you placed things the way they are, but it leaves that one issue. As for the "flame," I think it's a personal preference.

Nice, eye catching, simple.

 

[Remote-Medic]

Nice, clean designs. Love them

 

[Redcaa]

Really like the designs. Anywho, whatithinkyoucoulddowithit.

You see the corner bit on the top right, that bold solid thick line?
How'd it look if that were to be dotted or dashed? Just an idea :3