My Logo

[Ivan Posavec]

Hello, i am making some logo for me, i made it in illustrator, what you say?

 

[Hoogle]

brutal honesty here your obviously selling design as a service yet your logo looks more like some 12 year old kid has just written their name with a can of spray paint on a wall. It just is not clean enough in my eyes if I was going to hand over my money for you to design me a logo.

Not saying it can't work but there is no typography management there some letters join and touch and some dont You Have a S for Skip and a d for Design.

In the UK a Skip is a big container that goes on the back of a lorry for people throwing out a lorry full of Trash is that the message you want to send when selling your services.

I am hard to please when it comes to logo design as I like minimal work with maybe some bold assets to it that is just in your face. Just using 1 color can also work but it needs to be the right color and maybe a highlight of another color.

If I was just to see your logo as it is then I would overlook it as I would just assume you specialise in trash can design and not Graphic design.

Branding is very hard to do especially for yourself as you want it to be perfect and sometimes you can overlook good stuff and think bad stuff is good etc, not everyone thinks like you.

for a reference this is a skip in the UK


I can see it working with some care and attention but a long way off in my opinion for a designer to be selling their services

 

[Ivan Posavec]

I am not selling anything man, i am just learning design btw, SK is abbrevation for Sisak (town i live in) and IP is abbrevation of my name (Ivan Posavec)
and this is one update:

 

[Hoogle]

Ah whole new perspective on it now then I thought it was actually you starting up with your own design company. No very good idea to learn by using real life situations good choice.

Best of luck to you as you have a long road ahead of you, Are you studying design of any nature or just going down the self taught path..

 

[Ivan Posavec]

i am learning it my self for now

 

[Oreo]

I would use a thinner font i think it would look better.

 

[Ivan Posavec]

It is not font, i "wrote" it with brush in my illustrator, but it can be resized

 

[Oreo]

Yeah but it still will be a font ! haha did you tried resizing ?

 

[iDad]

Have an awesome idea for that logo using the name and a stone

 

[niceday999]

i think "Design" is main content so that "Design" shuold be bigger