My first jobs in Photoshop

[Sly]

Hi guys!
This is a my first jobs in Photoshop, did at example by my friends, and this is a result.
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Would you show me please mistakes, I mean ... Maybe something not be enough(light, shadow, etc.)?

Regards Drew.

 

[iDad]

show you what?

 

[Steve]

show you what?

Mistakes, Drew is asking for a critique.

Would you show me please mistakes, I mean ... Maybe something not be enough(light, shadow, etc.)?

 

[Steve]

Drew they look nice to me but but your spelling is terrible, I couldn't read one word of the text. :lol:

I'm not really a design and graphics guy, I'm a photographer but they both look pretty good to me.

 

[iDad]

oh I see now, the word mistakes wasn't in the first post ........

 

[Raymond Worrilow]

Drew,

looks real nice..!! just noticed thought that the bottom of the grass isnt much darker than the top... I would think it is much darker, from the light of the sun
Ray (Blackbayou)

 

[hawkeye]

Design is very subjective, so I won't comment on that.

Technically: The perspective where I indicated is wrong, unless it was bent in the middle you wouldn't see the interior on both ends. If it was bent in the middle you should add shading to make it appear so.

As the end of the outer object indicates it is rounded, you should add a reflection to add to the effect. If you want the inside object to appear round, do it there also.

 

[iDad]

it looks like it's bent in the middle on my screeen

 

[iDad]

although the text does not

 

[hawkeye]

although the text does not

That's why I assumed that it was not intended to be so. Of course it is intended to look bent, then I think the text should be as well. But in the end, it's all subjective.

 

[Sly]

To Steve: Yes, my english very bad, another time I will try write a better and thank you.
To hawkeye:

Design is very subjective, so I won't comment on that.

Technically: The perspective where I indicated is wrong, unless it was bent in the middle you wouldn't see the interior on both ends. If it was bent in the middle you should add shading to make it appear so.

As the end of the outer object indicates it is rounded, you should add a reflection to add to the effect. If you want the inside object to appear round, do it there also.

Thank you, I'll bear the idea in mind.

 

[phartdesign]

The first design is nice and clean, i like it.