My first design here :)

[Hytham]

Hi everybody..

I wanna know your opinions about this design that i made "it's about good days in the past and bad present ! "..it's clear that I'm not pro..so i need your advices

 

[dv8_fx]

That's a good creative concept.

I agree with the others. All you need is coaching and guidance.

Good work. Hope to see more.

 

[Barrettathome]

good art

 

[$1r_M4x1mu$]

Hi Hytham

Nice Job

Keep it up, remember practice makes perfection, just keep learning every day a little more, and practice, practice and some more practice.

Only thing missing is the clock hands other ways instead of a clock looks like a speedometer; unless really is a speedometer

Also the paint splatters seems too big and a lil confusing, just my thoughts dough.

btw i like the smiling sun

Cheers.

 

[johnnyglaire]

Not bad.
Just keep it up.
One thing I can critic is that the color blue is too strong, might have to soften it to make it more ease to look at.
But good job! Kudos!

 

[Hytham]

Thanks a lot guys for your replays and advices

 

[Junsai]

Okay? I don't think I see what you're going for lol.

 

[Helldorado]

Looks great man, keep it up!

 

[JgraphNet]

Can't figure this one out... It's disturbing and pleasent at the same time ...
But hey - it got me thinking and since it did that, it's good !!

 

[Hytham]

Thank you guys !

Can't figure this one out... It's disturbing and pleasent at the same time ...
But hey - it got me thinking and since it did that, it's good !!

nice theory ..i didn't think of it before..thank you !

 

[brandon skyy]

nice concept, i think that could be a really nice idea for a design. however skill wise of the pic, not very good. but you are still learning so take everyones advice and shape it into your own. first thing im gonna tell you is dont add cartoons with actual photos (sun and baby) it looks REALLY corny, stick to one or the other. remember the goal is to make your picture look realistically believable, but not necessarily realistic lol (get it). work on your blending technique, im sure if you have a passion for design you will grow into a dope designer.

 

[angnangita]

Its good for a first time.. im still working on my first design ill post it once its finished...

 

[GoingHAM]

i think you should take out the eyes and the sun...