Magazine mock-up

[afterfola]

Hiya! After retuching a photo I've decided to turn it into a magazine cover. Thoughts?

 

[thebestcpu]

Wow, that great @afterfola!!
I only had one thing that caught my eye that may or may not be what you want. It drew my eye to it and I saw it as a slight distractor to the overall beauty of your work.
The way the white of the eye (sclera), make-up, and post processing, it looks like the the white is bleeding out from the eye.
I double asked my wife to give the image a look and she unprompted mentioned that same thing.
Everything else seemed to have an amazing flow. Great work
John Wheeler

 

[afterfola]

Wow, that great @afterfola!!
I only had one thing that caught my eye that may or may not be what you want. It drew my eye to it and I saw it as a slight distractor to the overall beauty of your work.
The way the white of the eye (sclera), make-up, and post processing, it looks like the the white is bleeding out from the eye.
I double asked my wife to give the image a look and she unprompted mentioned that same thing.
Everything else seemed to have an amazing flow. Great work
John Wheeler

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Ohh I do see what you mean! Might've done a bit too much on the eyes. Thank you for the great feedback!

 

[thebestcpu]

You're welcome @afterfola