here is my WILD WEST poster work :)

[anveshiano]

hi friends..
plz checkout my poster work...and let me know ur feedback

( this is poster is a composting of 3 images; 2 of them belongs to "red dead redemption game" , which are used as a background)

 

[Steve]

Welcome to PSG.
Over all it's a good start but the hat is all wrong.

 

[anveshiano]

thanks a lot steve..
Is der any wrong with dimensions or placement of hat..? i couldn't figure it out.. please suggest me.

 

[Steve]

To me it looks to small, to high on the head, and a completely different texture than the rest of the image.
To much contrast compared to the rest of the image.

Also don't forget to add shadow on the face because of the hat.

 

[anveshiano]

aww.. now i can see all those flaws in my image.. i will work on dem
cheers for ur reply..u really hav a gud eye for detail

 

[Stefano]

I like it, overall but agree about the hat. The girl doesn't look real but the guy from the photo of course does, sorta weird.

Good, clean composition though for a simple few layers poster.

Cool, love seeing peoples stuff!

-Stefano

 

[anveshiano]

I like it, overall but agree about the hat. The girl doesn't look real but the guy from the photo of course does, sorta weird.

Good, clean composition though for a simple few layers poster.

Cool, love seeing peoples stuff!

-Stefano

thanks my friend..
u were right about the girl..i cud have put some other real person instead of using a toon girl..
ny way thats an immature attempt..hehe..

 

[agentmoeller]

I say keep the toon girl, and posterize or desaturate the guy, add some grainy texture to both, and play with the opacity.


Agent

 

[sunrise]

well , UR work is good , and they right about the girl and the hat.

when i saw the pic I see something wrong , and the answered.

thnx 4 sharing UR pic .

 

[rasoN]

You can probably do much better,colors are not very good ,and the hat position and look overal looks bad.you should add shadow below the hat for the better appearance Good luck with further working

 

[anveshiano]

hi friends...
thanks a lot for your analysis..i appreciate it
well..it seems like i have to spend lot of time in it..
cheers..

 

[printchesco]

You are off to a good start here. Just mind all the details, such as texture and shadows to make the images blend well. Hope to see the revised version.

 

[printchesco]

I think that the different elements don't tie up that well together, making it look as if it is just a bunch of images piled on top of each other. Try balancing things out so that the reds and the browns and the blacks would connect better with each other than this.

 

[sam123]

nice work