Here goes... My first post... Let me know what you think.

[chillman]

Hi everyone. Chuck here. I have been looky louing long enough. A friend of mine wanted me to work on a cd cover for her. We did a collage in black and white and I have some reservations about it. Let me know what what you think. Be gentle. It's my first time. This is actually the inside of the booklet.

 

[nitrobutler]

Chillman: Art is in the eye of the beholder, that said let me make some observations
1/lovely model
2/image at lower right has different contrast compared to the others.
3/ image at lower left has too much space over her head (grassy area).
4/ I agree with you about using B/W (which is great to use to show moods etc.) But seeing she has a great smile in all the shots why not let that smile shine in color?
5/ Great start!

 

[Lee]

I think you did a great job, Chuck. Kudos, bro.

 

[John1]

It's actually quite good, but the variations in the photographs could have been better; they all look a bit the same, same expressions, environment, clothes, lighting, etc.
But like I said, the actual work inside Photoshop is well done
One tip; try to make the image less "symmetric", the result will be more dynamic

 

[chillman]

Thank you very much for the tips. I'll work on it some more and post the new one up. Thanks!