Give me the comment about my adv design

[ciwecom]

That's my first adv. design below:
pls give me the comment, and what wrong with this design??
is feel ok??
thank!!

 

[ljiljana]

Hi, ciwecom

It is good concept , but in my opinion you used to many colors ( not encluding prodact colors) red, yellow, white, green , pink , black...

You did a great Cook Book Cover!

 

[Welles]

I like it ciwecom though the word Promotion doesn't seem quite right to my eye. Perhaps it is the white shadow?

Cheers!

 

[ciwecom]

What about this one?

color and layout feel ok?

 

[Tron]

ciwecom I think you got there Bud I like that on a lot

 

[Welles]

Ahh... This one is better to my eye. It draws more attention to the products in the inset pictures and still has the model a strong presence. I prefer this treatment of the word Promotion too!

 

[ljiljana]

ciwecom Great, it looks much better now. I like it. :}