Fool on the Hill -- WIP

[ibclare]

This is a work in progress. I don't really have that much time into it yet. 6 hours maybe. I would really like to get your feedback before going any further. Saves time and tears, so to speak.

 

[ibclare]

It must be really bad huh? OK well, I'll stick it in the yet to be considered worthy of working on folder!

 

[Inkz]

Oh, I missed this piece Clare...

Ok, here goes. It's looking pretty nice so far. I personally wouldn't go for the pinkish tint in the sky. Maybe a sky with the sun facing directly to go with the shadowing of the dog and man walking the dog.

I also feel the man jumping and the guy's on the bridge, it's looking a little perspective. What I mean is, the dude jumping looks huge or the bridge looks tiny.

Hope this helps.

 

[ibclare]

Thanks Inkz. I am taking a whole new approach. The bridge and the guy jumping just don't fit. I have taken them out and retitled this. It is a solitary journey, a man and his faithful companion. I have deleted the violet sky at your suggestion and warmed up the whole image.

 

[Inkz]

Now that has a completely different feel, and it's a good one.

Maybe do another cloud render over the top at screen blend mode just to have some mist go over the man and dog, not too much, just enough to blend them in a bit more.

 

[ibclare]

Actually, all I have to do is go back into the cloud mask and restore them. Good suggestion.

That worked well.

Now to let it rest. I'll work on it again tomorrow. I have a job right now. Or, it'll get reopened this evening more likely . . .