First attempt at abstract graphic, feedback appreciated

[Conflictable]

Hi everyone, sorry Ive been gone for a while, been super busy w/ school and all, haven't really had time to work on projects, but now that things have settled down i should be posting some more of my GFX

So this is my first attempt at making a contemporary abstract wallpaper....I kinda got bored of making collages of stupid stuff

Anyway, any feedback is greatly appreciated

Hope you enjoy,

 

[MikeyC]

I like it. The colors are good. The only thing I would fix is the text, it doesn't really fit the style of the piece. I think you are trying to protect your work with the design and placement of it as well. I would probably use it as a wallpaper if the text was smaller and not so noticeable.

 

[hanms]

I agree with the text, but I quite like the metallic texture of the background..
My only wish would be that it continued throughout the whole page instead of cutting off at the edges, and if you did that to create a cylinder-like shape, perhaps the central logo could aid with that a bit more?
Just my opinions though..

 

[HaAwCK]

I really like it, but as the others said; "Text doesn't fit".
Either way, the text is cool too.

 

[$1r_M4x1mu$]

white pattern overlay over the main piece is too strong, maybe lower opacity or change color to match the color theme, also the main object glow in the middle is too saturated as well try lowering glow effect.
i can be redundant i know but it just my opinion.

by the way
well done i like it