Feedback request for my "card" design

[Liss1024]

Hello!
I am making "cards" for my future video, I want to showcase a monster from a game and share some facts about it. So far I've made this
I like the look overall, but red text bothers me. I wasn't able to figure out better color for it and it is not very easy to read.
Anyway, all feedback and advices are welcome, feel free to share even negative opinions. Thank you in advance!

 

[IamSam]

Hello and welcome to the forum.

Can you explain all of this? It's very confusing.

 

[Liss1024]

Can you explain all of this? It's very confusing.

I don't really understand what you want explained. I moved same picture to background layer and made it black and white, so there are a lot of legs, yeah

 

[IamSam]

Is there anyway you can just have one Boar? This image is a mess.
I believe that the boar image needs to be refined and defined so that it's understood exactly what it is.


I'm really confused about this.....

 

[Liss1024]

Is there anyway you can just have one Boar? This image is a mess.
I believe that the boar image needs to be refined and defined so that it's understood exactly what it is.

Got it, I'll try with just one, thanks!

I'm really confused about this.....

It's hair I guess... Idk, I didn't design the creature itself

 

[IamSam]

Got it, I'll try with just one, thanks!

Great! I really think that will help this card out more than anything!

It's hair I guess... Idk, I didn't design the creature itself

I see....if you don't know then how's the viewer to know? Rhetorical....LOL!!

 

[JeffK]

Full confession - I am NOT a designer. I tend to be more of a mechanic and work with the tools and parts that I have.

I agree that the red type is hard on the eyes - tends to "vibrate a bit, especially on these tired orbs So I went with dropout (white) type, simple sans serif face. Also enlarged the boar pair - hair and all - and also upsized the BOAR logotype, placing it behind those imposing animals. I felt both those elements should be stronger. Moved things around a bit as you can see and the old editor in me took charge and changed some of the grammar.

So just some suggestions here and certainly not a judgement of your work:

 

[Liss1024]

Full confession - I am NOT a designer. I tend to be more of a mechanic and work with the tools and parts that I have.

I agree that the red type is hard on the eyes - tends to "vibrate a bit, especially on these tired orbs So I went with dropout (white) type, simple sans serif face. Also enlarged the boar pair - hair and all - and also upsized the BOAR logotype, placing it behind those imposing animals. I felt both those elements should be stronger. Moved things around a bit as you can see and the old editor in me took charge and changed some of the grammar.

So just some suggestions here and certainly not a judgement of your work:

I actually didn't like simple white text until you showed me how good it can be. Definitely would be using your advice, thanks a lot!

 

[IamSam]

I think the font could be more like the "BOAR" font and the same color. (The font bleow is not my favorite, but it's what I had)
As I stated before, the main problem with your original is the image of the boar itself...........really needs to be changed.