falling in lava

[Burned Ice]

that's me falling in lava, picture is taken on a camp in france, i like the effects very much.

some comments?

 

[Paul]

Maybe put more action into the falling guy, also a bit to far away.

 

[Burned Ice]

the picture was actually composed for challenge week # 12

 

[Paul]

And my comments still stand mate.

 

[fenix]

Try play a little with motion blur

 

[SeniorS]

Me likes. Maybe more undersandable would be rotate guy a litle so he more falling (like skydiver or something) not jumping.

 

[$1r_M4x1mu$]

Nice Job Burned Ice

Agreed whit mate's comments above, you should add something to the guy, looks a bit flat to me.

Other than that, is a really nice composition.

Keep it up.

 

[ibclare]

that's me falling in lava, picture is taken on a camp in france, i like the effects very much.

some comments?

I like the effects too. I guess the one thing that bothers me a bit is that he doesn't look like he is enough a part of the composition versus being on top of it. Probably because the light swirls are so light they disappear passing over him. Maybe if you found a way to emphasize them more or change him (you) so that you meld more into the background... you know be just a bit consumed by fire and smoke. You look too clean!


and too clear, come to think of it. Like fenix said, some blur perhaps? or decrease the contrast. There's a bit too much variance between the boy and his surroundings. IMHO.

 

[jaynestar]

was the lava hot? hehe

 

[Burned Ice]

was the lava hot? hehe

not as hot as me XD

 

[l13dop]

loos good but i also would say maybe a bit more blur to enhance the drop! apart from that very good

 

[Pepperbel]

good idea. I think maybe a little steam? I like steam.