Started off following this tutorial for a text effect. Came up with these two, one is similar to how it should be and second one is what I got after playing with it:

Tutorial link:
How to Create an Abstract Wireframe Text Effect | Psdtuts+
Somehow first one looks better than 2nd... What would you change on them?




Tutorial link:
How to Create an Abstract Wireframe Text Effect | Psdtuts+
Somehow first one looks better than 2nd... What would you change on them?