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[DBV]

Started off following this tutorial for a text effect. Came up with these two, one is similar to how it should be and second one is what I got after playing with it:

Tutorial link:
How to Create an Abstract Wireframe Text Effect | Psdtuts+

Somehow first one looks better than 2nd... What would you change on them?

 

[dv8_fx]

Looks good.

 

[$1r_M4x1mu$]

Hi AdrijusG

Nice Job, if you are following the tut, the first image will be pretty close to what you've got on the tut, but i'll say it needs some light effects to give it some light and make it more vivid.

The second one, being a free style composition looks better, due to the effects, try applying those effects to your first image, i think it will make it look awesome.

Keep it up.

 

[Hytham]

Great work!, Especially the second one
I agree with "$1r_M4x1mu$"...the first one need more light effects

 

[sunrise]

great ,,