Ed Sheeran x Yelawolf - The Slumdon Bridge Cover

[Vetoed]

http://smcveigh92.deviantart.com/#/d4oqgwe

Made this today, I know the lighting on the ginger kid looks off but I got impatient and bored doing this piece :'(

What you guys think?

 

[DoTTGaMMa]

It looks pro

The thing I see that needs some work is, yeah as you said the lighting a bit, also you need to have your two people "pop" out more from the background, and the Title needs to fit in and stand out more

Other than that it looks like something you would find in any music store, great job!

 

[Vetoed]

It looks pro

The thing I see that needs some work is, yeah as you said the lighting a bit, also you need to have your two people "pop" out more from the background, and the Title needs to fit in and stand out more

Other than that it looks like something you would find in any music store, great job!

Yeah I did another version shown below, but then changed it last minute to get the effect shown in the 1st post, so originally the text did stand out. I just couldnt be asked to go and fix it. Probably will fix it 2mrrw because its staring to annoy me lol

 

[DoTTGaMMa]

I looked at your DeviantArt through the picture, it seems you do this often and rarely make the mistake anyways...
But what I am talking about is that the Title of any album needs to Stand out more, and show emphasis.

In both images it is too small and does not have enough contrast with the background- it mixes in too well with the yellow.

 

[ibclare]

Good. Glad you changed your attitude toward it as I was about to ask you why you'd bother to work on something that bores you! I mean, unless it's a job. That I could understand :}