critique and ideas

[1adam-12]

Hey all... i am playing around and made this poster for my friend.... please tell me what ya think... any ideas is MUCH appreciated... good or bad... what can i improve??? also, i am looking for some other option to replace the BLACK.... i cant really seem to find just the right thing...

thanks in advance...Dave

 

[ibclare]

Dave, just post a jpeg. A lot of people don't want to open up psd files.

 

[agentmoeller]

How about a black-red gradient?

 

[sunrise]

sorry , the pic has a problem that i can't see it .

if U can show us by anthor way to help