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Cover for Facebook By Me


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Hytham

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Hello guys..i made this Facebook cover...i wanna know your suggestions if it need modify.
I wrote the second line with blur effect because i think it's reflect the meaning..i don't know if it looks good or not ?
and the lamp represent "Truth"..I made the second line sharper than the 1st because the truth is clear :D
Finally this quote by Ghandi

Cover 01.jpg
 
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Hello and welcome to PSG Hytham.

I like your banner and I like the message =)

My suggestions:
- My eye tends to read the second line first. If you want the reader to go for the first line instead then you should put it on top.
- I like the blur/transparency effect on the second line, and I like the texture of the background.
- I am not keen on the black shadow/outline effect on the first line, it's a bit harsh.
- The light is very yellow, you could reduce the saturation of it slightly.

Hope this helps some, just my .02 :)
 
Thanks a lot for your comment and advices :)
But i can't get something...i think you talking about the second line as the top one?...because the blur effect is on the top one.
I will try to change the top line to make eyes look at it firstly...i may change the position.
And i will decrease the saturation of the yellow light.
 
oh i got you!...you are talking about this sentences: "The truth is still the truth, even if you are a minority of one."...

no the right sentences is "Even if you are a minority of one ,The truth is still the truth."...but i wrote the second part with Capital letters to make it clear like the truth!!...it maybe wrong..i don't know :)
 
I would try putting the top line with upper-case letters or bringing it out more. Just like Admin I focused in on the second and my brain red that one first. With that kind of sentence you want them to read the one on top first.
 
need improvement
change the font and color of the text in first line

decrease the opacity Yellow Color
looks more natural
 
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