Specific Can you please help with this one? Retouching.

[aliyburkhanov]

Guys, sorry for making so many posts lately, but I have only recently discovered you and my photos never been photoshopped/retouched so nicely.

Can you please retouch the face, fix BG (if it is possible make it gray and give some depth), and work with ligthing little bit, "so that to make it stylish as it is in mag covers"
P.S. It is for business purposes to put into my profile.

 

[JVO2]

Attempted -

 

[aliyburkhanov]

@JVO2 can you please remove black shadows around all over me? thanks in advance.
btw improve quality of pic as well. Many thanks for attempt

 

[Eggy]

How's this?

 

[aliyburkhanov]

@Eggy Can you please make the face little bit brighter (right side especially)? other parts are awesome

 

[Eggy]

This way?