Before and after edit

[stufflol]

What do you think of this? its a before and after , ps im abit noob

 

[Vafann]

Beautiful!!

 

[JgraphNet]

Very nice ! Good thinking.

My only problem is with the blue pupil and highlight in the eye(-s) ...

 

[SeniorS]

Me likes.

I see that lips losted details because of saturation but that can easily fixed by applying orinal lips over it and playing with blending mode..