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[lofly]

hi i'm new here. ............................ ................

 

[costisefu]

your photo seems grainy, like it is taken with a phone. I would use a better one.

 

[ibclare]

Nice colors. Good composition, great textures, and I really like the colorization on the face.

Maybe the color scheme of the background could use a little variation in value as they're all more or less the same right now. Not enough contrast for my tastes. My biggest critique is the text. It disappears and was the last thing I saw. In fact, I almost said, "why don't you put some text on so we can see how it looks." It is IMO too narrow or at least not a large enough font size.

 

[lofly]

thank you both for your thoughts. i'm gonna try something and will post back soon.

 

[lofly]

how about something like this for the txt?

 

[ibclare]

Better. How about the other comments? What are your thoughts?

 

[lofly]

i agree. im on the edge of scrapping it and starting all over.

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[lofly]

i don't know

 

[lofly]

one more..

 

[lofly]

it's starting to make me feel nauseous. i think i need to start over. thank you for taking a look and taking the time to write your feedbacks!

 

[Paul]

I would blend the face into the liquid effect more and saturate it to the same colour tone maybe?

 

[lofly]

still here

 

[Paul]

Too much blend mate, just soften it.

 

[Paul]

More like this i meant.

 

[lofly]

thanks for your input

 

[iDad]

Personally I think the whole problem is the wave on the forehead and the shadow does not belong