a try of a manipulation...

[jesse__H]

hello,
Here is my first manipulation, I've used a tutorial and this came out
please give me some good critique
Grtz Jesse

 

[Inkz]

Pretty good first attempt at a tutorial...

Hard to give critique when following a tutorial really. But how it came out is a good start.

Take notes on what you've learned from the tutorial.

 

[ibclare]

Nice manipulation, especially for a first. IDK what the final image in the tutorial looked like, but I am just thinking that the high spot on the water wall is a little high. IMO it should be a little lower and come rushing in with a bit more perspective. Just a though. Keep up the good work.

 

[ALB68]

Dam broke back behind there!

Nice manipulation, especially for a first. IDK what the final image in the tutorial looked like, but I am just thinking that the high spot on the water wall is a little high. IMO it should be a little lower and come rushing in with a bit more perspective. Just a though. Keep up the good work.

 

[ibclare]

yes, then the water in front needs to be higher. There's just something off.

But heck, it's a minor point compared to the technique used to create it all. Turned out well.

 

[jesse__H]

This is the tut I've used http://psd.tutsplus.com/tutorials/photo-effects-tutorials/flooded-city-scene/
And my stock foto http://www.newurbanarchitect.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/Paris-Street-2.jpg
I hope that's enough info.

Grtz Jesse