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[Paul]

Top bloke.

Critique please.

 

[Hoogle]

i prefer the more cartoon like 1s you do but the photo realism 1s are probably harder as to keep all the texture.

Could you not mask the cigarettes into the lips a bit more as they appear to be floating
and remove some of the smoke from the bottom just makes it look faded and move that smoke trail down a bit to the end of the cigarette

 

[iDad]

Whodat

 

[Paul]

A chain smoking food critic who travels the world eating anything going while smoking and drinking all the time, what a guy.

 

[iDad]

Oh I think my wife watches him on hgtv or the food channell lol

 

[Paul]

Yeah thats is show, no reservations with Anthony bordane (spelling) lol.

 

[ibclare]

Looks good, except for the cigarettes not being in his mouth, or was that the intention?

 

[Paul]

Not got it right so i did another.